I decided to develop the design which was the overall favourite from the critique. I began by getting rid of the illustration as advised. Then I worked on the overall arrangement of the type. I aimed to make it more organised and spacious. I trailed the design with white and grey backgrounds however this was not as successful because the design was not as bold and the yellow did not stand out as much. I tried different sizes and numbers of As, as well as representing a stolen 'a' and finally I tried a different approach, allowing the A to take up the whole page, but repeated on top.
I feel that the new arrangement advised from my crit group was far more successful as the overall layout appears more organised and legible. Comparing this to the original, you can see how squashed everything appeared. I now plan to select my final screen print from these developments.
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